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Re: I Know
i'm a huge death note fan, so props for writing a fan fiction :) I really liked it. There were a few mistakes littered about, but i couldn't find any ...
Dec 24, 2008 -
Re: The Zipper of Your Pants part 3
yay update! well, i liked it. though it still kinda seems like its searching for a plot.. just my opinion. the brother sounds interesting, and mildly weird. Sara is awesome. ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Missing In Action - Part One
yay a OHSHC fanfic!! i liked your Kyoya, his way of thinking was in character. I think i saw a couple of typos, but nothing too major. Are you continuing ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: SITY: chapter two
NEXT CHAPTER IS UP
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: SITY: chapter three
Previous chapter: NOTE: This time, it's Olli's POV Someday, we'll look back on this. Then we'll laugh nervously and change the subject. I was content to just sit there and ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Two of a kind
An Outsiders fic. Because I'm currently obsessing Timothy Shepard. His POV by the way. Set during the book, when Tim visited Dally in hospital. -- Tim Shepard always considered himself ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Another Eragon Poem
I'm not great at poetry, so I can't really critic on the layout and stuff. But the last line, maybe you could split it into separate lines? After the other ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: My Own Personal Haiku
lol that was actually really amusing. I don't think I could've seen that ending coming XD
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Stay Gold
Zach Zach watched the argument between the two greasers with amusement. The boy seemed to have some sense underneath that mop of hair, but the girl seemed very stubborn, very ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: The Night Games
Faolan Ryder - 17 - human - Nightlands I exhaled a ring of smoke, tapping my foot on the ground. Jordan and Kacey were inside, working over the store owners. ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Stay Gold
Zach He was sprawled on the rough concrete, Jason still lying on his back, and a Greaser girl watching on with a mix of disgust and amusement. He was slowly ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: The Night Games
lol Yay Fao will be pleased. Kind of. He might be a bit of an ass about it...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: The Night Games
Faolan's Bi.. any takers??
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: The Outsiders
I'm thinking of writing a chaptered Outsiders fanfiction. Any ideas or anything you want to see happen? Character pairings you absolutely love or loathe??
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: Screw Being A Hero
Cheshire-Writer, thanks so much for the comment. It made my day. I just got my own copy of the book two hours ago ^___^ I'm thinking of a chaptered outsiders ...
Oct 25, 2008
